Trying to work on composition, and on smashing together the 2 drawings styles I seem to have ended up with (life drawing emotional style and more scientific/detail focused illustration style):
‘If you’re going to work with colour you need to use the colour more. Good composition and lines but you need to think more about which colours and where they meet, and strengthening them for contrasts’
I gave up the colours, went back to graphite and charcoal, in the interests of focusing on the line style
Think in the end I was successful!
‘good bold compositional decision making’
lovely quality of line – keep going